The animation was on another level, but the voice acting didnt match the quality of the animation. It felt more like someone did a poor redub of a ren and stimpy cartoon.
Good work on the art side of it though!
Not a zero..
..since that version of the Star Spangled Banner was still better than Aguilera's.
Very well done!
Especially the animation with Jack (i think his name was)
Seemed very professional!
The only thing was, it sounded like the quality of the sound was sub par.. but very well could be my speakers.
Well, great job you've done here! 10/10 5/5
Flawless, JohnnyUtah quality, as always.
Great art, animation, voiceovers,
and with every flash, new, amazing one-liners are born.
Never cease to please haha
Don't change anything about yourself, Johnny.. You are perfect
just the way you are
that's not what my mom tells me
Everything is great! Except..
I've been impressed with the animation and the illustrations in all of your work I've seen so far, but I still don't get your voice acting.
I can get past that, I still enjoy your work, but are those the voices you're aiming for?
If so, meh.
If not, I say you should try out looking for people here on Newgrounds.
As always, great work with everything else.
I love the animations, the music fits,
but I have to say, the sound is terrible.
There are sounds that either don't fit, or they're too quiet, or the sound's just not there! Like the scene where the Neenja is sprinting in the end, there is no sound. It's pretty anti climactic and ruined the scene.
It's still a good flash, but it could be great!
The Swain, when will you make more Blockhead?
I like that Mastermind is still going too.
Also, R.I.P. Peter Steele.
Looking forward to the next one
Great animation, music,
but there were some parts where there could have been a sound effect, like when he slams his laptop closed, eating the fortune cookie,
and the voice acting didn't match the mustache man too well.
other than that, one of the best looking animations I've seen on Newgrounds!
Good luck with finishing up the series
well this really goes against the grain with what we are used to seeing.
i really liked your points,
and im sorry to hear your situation, but really glad to know you've come out a changed man!
so good message!
not really anything to argue or point out.
although i can think of some other benefits and disadvantages to playing video games, but thats another flash i guess.
and for the animation
i think the burning of the world of warcraft was a powerful scene,
but i think the hand puppet character took away from the sincerity of the message you were conveying.
it was as if the flash were appealing to a much younger audience at those parts, but the content was clearly aimed at another audience, still youth, but not to an audience so young that the hand puppet should take the place of the guy at the desk..
animation was decent, i believe you got your point across,
this is a good flash!
a nice tale of redemption and a good call to action!
this is great!
i love the art, the story, and everything about this is so... pro-looking!
there are some parts where the sound effects could be a little more intense, but other than that, it looks like what you've got a great anime in its early stages!
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